Monday, March 25, 2013


Wow! On the way to softball I had butterflies in my stomach. I talked to my friends about what we were gonna do when we get there. After that we got there we pulled out the bags and walked to the field. We had a little warm up before the game. The team had a little talk about what we are going to do when we are fielding. The horn went, we line up into our batting order. After all the games we had our finally we got to our last game it was a close but we still win bye one


  1. You did so well to win the Tournament. I would have loved to hear a lot more of the details of your day and how you were feeling during game play - remember to show not tell like we've been practising in class.
    Mrs Nua

  2. That's a great story Grace and did you have fun?
    It's great that you's won that game lucky!
    What a wonderful day that was.
    Keep up the good work.

    1. Thanks and yes I did have fun what about you? That was wonderful thanks for asking.

  3. Hey Grace,
    Great job at the tournament you guys did great. Nice to see you writing about your softball games and how you did. Keep it up, your doing a great job of writing about your day.

  4. Hi Grace Fantastic job on writing about your softball tournament. Great job on winning and it's good to see you posting on your blog. I hope to see more of your posts.Keep up the Fabulous work.

    By Alexandria.j


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