Monday, March 25, 2013


Wow! On the way to softball I had butterflies in my stomach. I talked to my friends about what we were gonna do when we get there. After that we got there we pulled out the bags and walked to the field. We had a little warm up before the game. The team had a little talk about what we are going to do when we are fielding. The horn went, we line up into our batting order. After all the games we had our finally we got to our last game it was a close but we still win bye one

Digital Footprint

Grace footprint from Team 4 Pes on Vimeo.

This is my movie about leaving a good comment.

Friday, March 22, 2013

Simile and Metaphor

My Character Hope

Appearance - what they look like

  • Light Brown Eyes
  • Long black hair
  • Tall

She has Black long hair and light brown eyes, she tall for her age. Her name is Hope
Personality - the kind of person they are

  • Funny
  • Smart
  • Creative
  • Bossy  

She’s funny and smart, but sometimes she is bossy.
Interests  - the things they like to do

  • Sports
  • Singing
  • dancing

She likes to play sports her favorite sports she like’s to play is rugby and netball.
What you enjoy doing with them?

  • Sports
  • Singing
  • dancing
I like to hang with her and sing and dance sometimes I  like to hang out with her because she’s funny.

Wednesday, March 20, 2013

About Alan Duff

Alan Duff is a New Zealand novelist and newspaper columnist. He was born and raised in a state housing area in Rotorua.  Many people therefore question whether or not Alan Duff is dead or alive. But he's not dead because he came to pt england. He has written many books.

Friday, March 8, 2013

Show Not Tell

Standing in the queue waiting to buy  ice-cream, on a steaming sunlit day. Sweat dripped down my forehead slowly  as if the temperature had gone up. It felt like my body has been in a fire I said.”Phew finally I made it to a shady tree”.

Monday, March 4, 2013

The girl who save her dad

This Morning we all completed out first writing sample for 2013. I have posted it just as I wrote it in the 40 minutes that we were given, so that throughout this year I will be able to look back and reflect on the progress I have made in my learning. I will post my goals from this soon.

One day in a town called Monster High there was a girl called Jessica. She live with her father named Jack  and her big sister Katie. One day her father went missing in the morning before she woke up. She looked up stairs and in the backyard event in the basement but could not find him.

Jessica walked outside looking down at her feet feeling sad. Until she saw her friend Mary. Her down sad face went up as she saw her. Jessica ran to her excitedly and said have you seen my dad, Mary replied no I haven't sorry. Until an alien came from outta space and took mary from her feet and flew into outer space on their rocket. Jessica just made it into the rocket. She saw her dad, mary and her sister katie in a room. Next to there room was another room filled with explosions. Jessica had a plan to blow up the rocket and get her dad, mary and katie out and into to the exit rocket before they blow up. Jessica quickly ran and got the keys and open the room that her dad was in before the bomb went off. They all ran to the exit rocket and flew back to earth. Everyone was happy that Jessica save them.