Wow guess what it felt like when I landed on the moon. In the space ship I got really excited because we were on the moon. As I got ready to step onto the moon I felt butterflies in my stomach.
With great difficulty to move I took my first step. Walking was awkward because there was no gravity. I jumped from place to place. When I was on the moon I could see the dusty ground. When I was walking around I could hear the whispering wind.
Have you ever dreamed that you were on the moon?
Hey Grace, I am looking at your blog from Christchurch. Your poem is greats - lots of really interesting words and supporting illustrations! Jen
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ReplyDeleteI'm your Blog Buddy Jennifer.I really like your story because you had awesome punctuation and cool topic words that makes your story amazing.I hope you have a great time in your class and have fun!!!!!