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Thursday, April 26, 2012

Grace Term 2 immersion assembly

I was looking forward to going to school after the holidays. I was mostly looking forward to seeing my friends. After meeting my friends the bell rang and we all lined up for the immersion assembly. That’s  when all of the teachers dress up in costumes and do an act of what we are doing this term.

We all went to the hall and saw cool and amazing costumes. We sat down and looked at all the teachers. Then the assembly started and Team One put on a movie about animal patterns. Team two was on next. They showed a movie it was so funny, then they did an act and it was funny too.  All painting and statues came art alive when Mrs Barks was talking about art.

Next it was team 3, 4 and 5 and all of their ones were cool. But my favorite one was team 2.  
  
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4 comments:

  1. Mr Chris MarksApril 29, 2012 at 3:46 PM

    Good start to the term Grace.

    I think your first paragraph is really good and definitely demonstrates an effective paragraph.

    when you next write I would like to see you use a variety of sentence types. How about including a question or some speech.

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    1. graceMay 8, 2012 at 8:58 AM

      Thank you for the comment I will use a variety of sentence types.

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    2. taamaiMay 22, 2012 at 2:14 PM

      Hi Grace I like your story it is really cool to read I really did like the way you write about the Term 2 immersion assembly.

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  2. faiosoNovember 16, 2012 at 5:31 PM

    Hi Grace your picture looks really i love you and you are beautiful keep up the good work by Faioso.

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