Sleeping in my tent I felt water dripping down the sides, it came in and wet my sleeping bag. I heard strange noises but mostly teachers telling off some people because they were not going to sleep. The lumpy uneven ground was making my back sore. Some people were not asleep and they were eating and munching on their secret stashes of lollies and chips.
I really like the way that you have written this Grace. You have used a variety of sentence beginnings, great hook sentence and super topic words. Your paragraph was very interesting to read. Well done!
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