Mr Marks called over to me and Hope to come and cut the onions. I cut the sides off and then cut the onion in half. Peeling the layers I started to get watering eyes. My eyes started to sting. I cutted half onion rings and put them on the plate.
Then Mr Marks put the onions and sausages on the BBQ to cook. Have you ever had a BBQ at school? I could smell the sausages cooking. It felt like I could tasted it.
After that Mr Marks stacked the sausages on top of each other. It looked like logs of trees. The sausages look like fat pencils.
Finally we got to taste the sausages. We got and got some bread and some napkin we lined up for our sausage. I lined up for some tomato sauce. It tasted delicious and I could see some crumbs falling of. After that we went to go have some lunch.
I like that you have interacted with your audience by asking a question during your writing.
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